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Connor's world story first series |
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Connor’s world
Connor’s world is a game system that was made for people to go into it with their feelings. You can do anything that you could do in real life in there. The game system was not made for leveling or anything but it was made for using your own skills and feelings. Most parents don’t know things about it, so they think that it’s dangerous for their kids to play inside.
Introduction
Chapter 1-The very lucky person
“Mom…can I please buy this game?” said Kroy “no son, this game is way too dangerous for you at your age” said Kroy’s mom. “But this game is different! Unlike other games, the syst-” Kroy’s mom stopped him. “No it’s not. Just get different games if you want.” said Kroy’s mom. “I guess she would never understand,” thought Kroy. Each night, Kroy had the same dream. It was about going into the Connor’s world. Battling monsters and making friends. It was the best thing that he could do, except for reading and writing books. “I am only 12! I’m having a little trouble now! Can anyone just help me? I’d give you 10 years of my life to you!! He screamed. He was also waiting for something big to happen. Unfortunately, nothing happened. He turned on his msn, someone wanted to talk to him. It was his second best friend, Alex. “He wouldn’t help me,” thought Kroy. The next day, Tony, the richest boy in the town came to school. “What sup?” yelled Tony. “Do you play Connor’s world?” “If you do, I will sell you my ultimate character for 100 bucks!” “It can even kill the strongest monster in the game!” No one would believe Tony, even the stupidest person in the class knows that you don’t need to have well trained character to beat the strongest monster in the game. Kroy thought to himself, “If he is selling his character, then that means he doesn’t play anymore!” He ran off to find Tony and his servant. “Tony K.! Uh I mean Tony D.” “Can you give me your Connor’s world game system?” asked Kroy. “Sure, take it! I’ll bring it tomorrow” replied Tony. “YES! Now I finally got it! But how am I supposed to play it when I am at home?” This is the first time Kroy had done something when he was not allowed to. “Well, when I get into the game, the time moves a lot slower, so it might be ok. Let’s see what this button do-…oh…what does this do then? Whoaaaaa!” He accidentally pressed a button, “looks like I am not ready for a landing! Whoaaaaa!”
Chapter 2-A noob and a pro?
“Whoaaaaa!” Cried Kroy. “Ow?” “Oh, so you are the new beginner huh?” Said a woman with a black T-shirt. “NOW! LET ME EXPLAIN WHAT YOU CAN DO HERE!” Said the woman. “Are you kidding me?!? I don’t need your help? Before you going in, you have to read like 2 pages!” said Kroy. He started to walk the opposite way that he came from. “Yea sure!” said the woman. “Go ahead and walk there!” “You’ll find something interesting.” Kroy turned around to face the woman. Kroy looked like he is going to punch her. “Attacking NPCs in the game might cause consequences!! Said the woman. Kroy didn’t care, he punched her on the face, not even hard, but hard enough to knock her down. “You are not a NPC! There are no
NPCs here in Connor’s world, idiot!” Then he started to walk again. “There,” he said. “Giant monsters and lots of people.” He tried to leave but two guys walked up to him. “Not so fast noob! I’ll show you what it’s like to be killed by a monster!” said one guy. You’d better learn it!” said the other guy. “You wanna teach me how to get killed by monsters eh?” Kroy said with a smile, “I’ll show you how a “pro” can be killed by a “giant monster”!” “Whoa! 360 spin plus a throw!” said one of the guys. “OH MY GOD! IT’S A PRO PRETENDING TO BE A NOOB!” “RUN FOR YOUR ITEMS AND CASH!” The two guys ran away as fast as they could. “Well, what happened after that is that a “giant monster” killed “the pro”! Krisco said as the guys ran off. “Cool enough to write a journal for me!” Though Kory.
Chapter 3-doing a dumb, boring quest at noob tower (middle of boring part)
“Please go back, then left, then right, then left to go to the noob tower.” said the game system. Kroy didn’t want to but he thought it might affect his future in the game, so he went there. There were a lot of people. They all looked like they were noobs, like he was. He saw a standing dog, with black nose and yellow fur. The dog said “Hey noob! Come here and try out for your weapon! Yes or No question, do you want to go?” “Sure.” said Kroy, although he didn’t want to go. “Please choose a weapon!” Said the system again. “Nah…these weapons are too dangerous for you to use... Ah, no it’s not, its different!” He was pretending to be his mom and himself. “Ah, I’ll just pick a sword.” “Ok, time for a little training.” There was a yellow thing coming. Kroy called it the yellow stuff since he didn’t know what it wass called. The yellow stuff was going nowhere! It went past him! He stabbed the sword on the ground and it died. “Ah? What happened?” “It’s dead?” He already knew it was dead, but to make it funny for the pros that were watching, he pretend that he didn’t know. “You‘ve completed the quest! Here! Take your weapon!” “That was the dumbest thing I’ve ever done….ever.”thought Kroy
Chapter 4-the soldier with most of the power
“Sir! There’s currently no enemy attacking,” said the crew. “Good, tell all the front line soldiers to attack them as quickly as possible and also tell them to wear “those”. Said the General. “Yes sir!” There seems to have people here trying to attack our castle for no reason. Thought the General. “We should have more army and weapons, the money we have were all used on the beginners and many of them did not join us” “There’s no point of doing such a silly things…uh…send a system message to the beginner’s tower saying that if you don’t join our army, no weapon would be provided” said the General. Also take away all the weapons that today’s beginner had taken back to our castle and bring 50 soldiers with you” Yes sir” said the crew.
Chapter 5- am I a criminal?
“Hey did you hear that today some soldiers were taking back the beginner’s weapon?” someone whispering. “Yea, another person said, they probably want some beginner that are brave enough to try out for the front solider line” “um, solider front line huh?” thought Kroy. “I can mess you guys up a little...” said Kroy with evil smiles on his face. “Hey the guy right there!” “Let me see your sword” said one of the solider. Kroy stopped walking, and then he started walking again. “You there! How dare you ignore now huh?” said the solider again. “Don’t you know you are really annoying?” said Kroy. “ “Did you hear what that kid said? “Hahaha! He said we are annoying! Hahaha!” said the solider again. “Mikazuki Geri” cried Kroy. That hit the soldier’s face and other soldiers seemed to be scared of Kroy too. “Don’t think that if you are better then us then you are the best, we still have a whole army waiting for you!” said the solider running with the others. From that on, Kroy is a criminal...
Chapter 6-giving up is a really good idea
“Hey! He is right there! Catch the criminal!” “When did I become a criminal? You just tried to attack me first!” said Kroy running. “You become a criminal at the time you kick one of our solider!” cried the solider. So at from that on, there were a chasing game going on in Connor’s world and Kroy didn’t even know what time is it now. “Hey you there! What time is it in real life?” asked Kroy stopped a little. “Its about 7 at night” said the boy. Kroy started to run again and now the front and back is full of soldiers. Uh…I knew I shouldn’t play with this army right? Thought Kroy to himself. “Uh, this isn’t so bad eh, only if this plan works…” thought Kroy. “Hey! I was just playing around with you guys! We play this game to have fun right? So lets go, I want to join your army,” said Kroy, as he really wants to. “Nice eh, with you we might get to higher rank!” said one of the solider. “Everybody! Lets celebrate for this new guy tonight!”. As they were still cheering for me, I was thinking if I would have chance to see their boss. “Hey guys I might have to go back now” said Kroy. “Ok! Just remember next time when you are here, you might have to help us take off beginner’s weapon” Ow! My head! Ow! Oh my gosh! Log out! Log out! Log out!!
Chapter 7-people on earth
“Whoa just came back from Connor’s world and its still only 1 hour although I felt like its like a whole school day” “Hey mom! What’s for dinner?” asked Kroy. “Your father and I are going out to eat dinner!” “ I guess you could stay home yourself right?” asked Kroy’s mom. “Yea! I guess...Kroy had to talk loud so he doesn’t have to go down and talk. “Now! I have more time to spend on Connor’s world.” He was eating his leftover pizza and started to talk on msn. He did not go on the game until his mom called him and told him that they are in the restaurant. Kroy put on his earphones, one of those plugs that you plug into the computer and some other craps. Then he got into the game, well again, he had to fall. When he landed, he saw a person dressed like a real high rank in the lunchroom. His face looked scary but with some kindness. I asked who is he, and everyone called him the greatest general. “He had been in the game since it’s released” said Don. I asked them what did he do to become a general and everyone said that he is one of the real general in real life. If anyone could beat him mind to mind, he said he would give up his position but no one did.
Chapter 7- Front line
“Hey new guy! What did you learn? Did you take lessons or something?” asked Don. “I take Karate, Tae Kwon Do, Kung Fu, Fight dance, Boxing, and Wresting every week,” said Kroy putting his things in his locker”. “Wow you should apply for the front line new guy!” “You are way better than us you know?” “Go left then go right again, you will find the registration place and just register there and they would tell you what to do,” said Don “Remember to come back to us and tell us how you did!” “We will always remember you!” said Don “Jeez…just add me buddy,” said Kroy. He went to the registration place as Don told him. There he saw only few people lining up and one of them looks like a 100% thief. I wasn’t the last one who lined up; there were still one person behind him. Finally, it’s my turn to hand in the form. The person that looked like a 100% thief took the sheet back and left. So I followed what he did and took the form from the lady. “Hey Kroy is back!” said Don to everybody else. “Hey you made it you know?” “It had been posted right here look!” “Someone had captured your video when hitting one of our solider” “That’s why you suddenly become the front line army!” said Don drinking a cup of water after that. “Here is the global news, the game system Connor’s world had been attacked by the newest virus and although it wouldn’t do any damage to the player but the player might not be able to logout from the game” “That’s all the news for today, I hope everyone would enjoy this weekend” said the news reporter.
Chapter 8- Virus
It was a crowd new day, which is only 2 hours in real life. People had been saying the same things “I can’t log out of the game!” Well I guess that doesn’t really matter to me since I can log out anytime I want. Even the people that I know can log out, I had been thinking why would that happen. Maybe I should have watched the news yesterday, but its too late. The next day at school, a person was missing and their parents came to the school and said, “my kid got stuck in the game!” Well, no one could help; the teacher is not a hacker and so as other people. At the time, I thought I was the only one who really knows about computer. But, it doesn’t matter to me since I have no reason to help the system. Not until I found out that two person, that’s important to me had got stuck in the game too. That’s when I wanted to help the system, and help them. But how?
Chapter 10-first series end
Each day was the same, I go to school, practice martial art, go on Connor’s world. I just want to figure out how did the hacker hack in the system without anyone noticing in such a secured area. Two of my best friends are gone and now only one of my best friends is left. They said that it would take months to unhack the game but who knows? They might take a year to unhack the game and they might say that it’s hard to do. Going to Connor’s world is the last thing I wanted to do now, after practicing martial arts, and write or read books. Now, I might even want to sell the system to other people. That’s all because I had no idea how people got stuck inside the game when I can still log out and in. So I just won’t go in, what if I got stuck too? And then my parents would yell on me. I think that’s a good ending.
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